Agree/ disagree sample essay - Writing Part 02

 A big Salary is more important than job satisfaction 
Do you agree or disagree?

Firstly you should decide the opinion you are going to write and have a stable opinion. Do not balance two opinions.

Opinion: Disagree with the statement of a big salary is more important than job satisfaction.

Introduction - Start writing your introduction using two sentences.

• Sentence No 01

Paraphrase the statement on the question.

“It is usually considered that it is more beneficial to have a job with a high salary although the job doesn’t make a reason for gratification.

• Sentence No 02

Mention whether you disagree or agree with the statement.

“ I strongly disagree with the statement and believe that job satisfaction is the most important when choosing a job.”

Body paragraph No 01

Explain why you disagree.

• Sentence No 01

Tell the 01st reason.

“ Firstly, I would argue that job satisfaction makes us feel fulfillment which money cannot buy”

• Sentence 2,3,4

Explain the above sentence in detail supposing the examiner has no idea about the topic you are writing.

“As far as I am concerned, Pleasure and sense of fulfillment always take the first place when living. Although someone has a good wage and still feels depressed and compromises with his work he won’t enjoy life. Someone who likes his task does not need anyone to superintend his work and he will accomplish his task with the congregation”

Give appropriate examples to prove your point

• Sentence 5

For example, a lot of world-famous businessmen have won their life in the occupation because they have chosen the field they were passionate about.

• Sentence 6

“That’s why It’s crucial to select the work which feels you perfect than consider only a good salary”

Body paragraph 02

• Sentence 01

Tell another reason why you disagree

Should be included in the main idea of the entire 02nd paragraph.

“Moreover, doing the job what you prefer to do is making you persuade. It helps to move forward in your career”

• Sentence 02,03,05

Imagine that your examiner has no idea about the topic and explain the above sentence more.

“To put it more simply, we can see a sturdy relationship between job satisfaction and efficiency. People who prefer their work can escalate in their industry and execute better outcomes, unlike the people who consider the high wage in the first place.”

• Sentence 6,7

Prove your point by giving an appropriate example

“For instance, The woman who wrote Harry Potter was a secretary until she stopped her job writing fiction for her fulfillment. Further,. Mark Cuban was fed up with the time in opening the doors and cleaning the computer retail store where he worked as a salesman. Eventually, he started his own company, and currently, owned a $3 Billion net worth.

• Sentence 8

Sum up the thoughts you have written in 2nd body paragraph

“ Therefore, It can be said that a job with a high salary always doesn’t keep you motivated and satisfied. It ends your creativity and movement.

Conclusion

“Taking everything into consideration, I thoroughly say that gratification of the job helps us to move forward in our career growth and keeps us stimulated”

Do not exceed 300 words.

Full Answer

It is usually considered that it is more beneficial to have a job with a high salary although the job doesn’t make a reason for gratification. I strongly disagree with the statement and believe that job satisfaction is the most important when choosing a job.

Firstly, I would argue that job satisfaction makes us feel fulfillment which money cannot buy. As far as I am concerned, Pleasure and sense of fulfillment always take the first place when living. Although someone has a good wage and still feels depressed and compromises with his work he won’t enjoy life. Someone who likes his task does not need anyone to superintend his work and he will accomplish his task with the congregation. That’s why It’s crucial to select the work which feels you perfect than consider only a good salary”

Moreover, doing the job that you prefer to do is making you persuade. It helps to move forward in your career.  To put it more simply, we can see a sturdy relationship between job satisfaction and efficiency. People who prefer their work can escalate in their industry and execute better outcomes, unlike the people who consider the high wage in the first place. For instance, The woman who wrote Harry Potter was a secretary until she stopped her job writing fiction for her fulfillment. Further, Mark Cuban was fed up with the time in opening the doors and cleaning the computer retail store where he worked as a salesman. Eventually, he started his own company, and currently, owned a $3 Billion net worth. Therefore, It can be said that a job with a high salary always doesn’t keep you motivated and satisfied and It ends your creativity and movement.

Taking everything into consideration, I thoroughly say that the gratification of the job helps us to move forward in our career to have growth and keeps us stimulated

(290 words)